Lets look at the edited cartoon. We have a character. He has eyes, a nose, a mouth. He has ears, a head, a body, hands, and feet. We covered how to draw all of that.
The expression on the face is one of excitment. He's excited to be playing the game. Thats good.
We added action to the drawing. We know that the character has just kicked the ball. Okay.
We used acessories. We used text. We used motion lines. Thats good.
Something just does not seem right about this drawing though. Can you guess what would make it better? Go back to the page "Step 10: Final Touch". We could use a little detail. I'll leave it to you as home work. Maybe add a tree or two in the background. Maybe a few sweat drops around the characters head. How about a few clouds. Put whatever you like. But be careful. Don't over do it. To much will make it cluttery. Also, be careful not to draw attention away from the main character.